Dear Gauri,
Very nice voice quality. Nice effort indeed. One suggestion. Kindly keep some more pause between the interviewer and the subjects when you interview. Specially between your peace and the 11 year girl child who spoke, was not having any space in between.If you keep a bit more pause, it can be edited, but if there is very less pause, it becomes very difficult to separate and give a pause.Best luck.
Baba/16-9-2011/Friday /11.55 hrs.

My dear Gauri,

I am happy that you are learning a new skill: writing for radio.

The original UPI style-book writers and reporters used to call it "Writing for the Ear", the same way, we "Write for the Eye" in print or online.

For example, you will understand punctuation in a new way.

Enjoy radio; it's an older sister to newspapers.

Peace and love,
- Joe.